Thursday, December 12, 2013

Example of Narrative Essay 1: A Change in Her Life


            The room reeked of medicine. She was surrounded by tubes and machines. I could barely recognize her. The beautiful girl with bright smile and shiny hair had vanished. In her place lay a thin, haggard woman with short spiky hair. Her eyes were closed tight and her skin had a pale shade to it. She was a bad comparison to the girl I once knew, beautiful, intelligent, confident, friendly… I could go on describing Shifa. She was the most admired girl in school and had won the ‘Most Promising Student’ award in the last year of our studies. Prosperity had been painted all over her and no matter what she did, she did it well. But that was eight years ago. Today, Shifa was a tortured woman. She had tried to take her life with an overdose of sleeping pills and had slipped into a unconsciousness. The Shifa I knew would have claimed that it was a coward’s way out. I had to know why she did it.  I had to find out the facts.
            The house remained the same. I had been a guest here frequently. Shifa had been my best buddy in school. She has been the direct opposite of everything I was. She had been well-known and I had very few friends. Nobody even knew I was in class most of the time. I was ordinary, reserved and shy. But Shifa had taken me under her protection and guarded me like a mother hen. She had taken me to her house and her family received me with pleasure. And ever since that day, I had been a constant visitor. Treading down the paved pathway brought back a lot of blissful memories. But joy was now replaced with distress, for Shifa was not here to partake them with me. I moved to the front door and rang the bell with a burdened/ grieving heart. How was I going to face her kin? How was I going to comfort them when I could not console myself?
            The door opened and I was met by a well-known face. The face was pinched and wrinkled. A look of sadness welcomed me. I introduced myself as I was sure, I would not be remembered. It had been ten years since I last visited. Shifa’s mother embraced me tight and began to cry uncontrollably. I held her and let her cry. Her only daughter was dying and the doctors had given up faith. Three hours later, when I walked out of the house, I was still battled as before. My questions remained unanswered. All I knew now was that Shifa had been employed as a corporate attorney in a well-known law firm. She had everything going for her, a good job, money, friends…everything. She travelled often. One day she had to fly to France to conclude a business deal. She was there for a week and telephoned her mum every night for the first three days. Then the calls ceased. She also did not answer her mum’s calls. A week later she came back but she was different. She was silent and stayed in her room all day. She refused to eat or see anyone. She stopped going to work, stopped taking showers and had stopped talking finally. She shut herself in her room and sobbed all day. Her mum had tried her best to get her some help. She had taken Shifa on many medical officers but they failed to cure her. Meanwhile, Shifa’s health worsened. All day long, she lay in bed crying. Then one day, her mum found her in bed with empty bottle of sleeping tablets lying on the floor beside her. She had never been conscious since.
            What had happened in France that made Shifa consume the sleeping tablets? What occurred in the four days that altered her life completely? Why didn’t she talk to anybody about what had happened? What was distressing her? Why didn’t she seek help from anybody? So many questions! Questions without answers, for, the only individual who could answer then is lying in some hospital bed unscious to be the world around her. Has she now found tranquility, the peace that she was so frantically seeking? Shifa, why did you do it?
(710 words)
Reference:
Sebastian M., Sharmini Balraj. (2004). Eksplorasi English Form 5. Selangor Darul Ehsan: Penerbit Fajar Bakti Sdn. Bhd.


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